Change Log
Comments
| Date | Version | Comment | Action |
|---|---|---|---|
| 240422 | 240419 | Leadership meeting 10:00-1230 pm. Working session, edits for all chapters for submission to WASC today. | √ eo 240422 See edited version emailed to leadership team today |
| 240419 | 240405 | Leadership meeting 10:00-1540 pm. Working session, edits for all chapters including Lynn's edits submitted on 4/15 | √ eo 240419 See edited version emailed to leadership team today |
| 240405 | 240401 | Leadership meeting 3:30-4:00 pm. Changes to Chapters 3, 4, 5. Edwel will add Chapter 4 critical area #6, and info regarding McREL partnership | |
| 240401 | 240331 Ch1 | p. 1 in the Brief Background of School paragraph: in the 3rd line, shouldn't "north pacific ocean" be capitalized? North Pacific Ocean p. 1 Seems all 4 of the ESLR statements are incomplete, as they say" "MSS students will, at a level appropriate to their age" but end there. p.2. first line change "two maintenances" to "two maintenance personnel", then change "serving" to "serve", then delete "two" before campuses; it's redundant. in the same paragraph after "vice-principal" add "complete the staff positions" to make it a complete sentence. Next sentence "Most of the faculties" change to "faculty", change "are" to "have" "about" three teachers take out "about" is it three or find exact number "from different public school" add "s" to school next sentence add "s" to "consist" last sentence in this para. change "willingness" to "generosity" since you use "who are willing" in the same sentence. Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion second paragraph change "wants to will get" to "want to, will receive..." and in the last sentence "including public school" add "s' to school. page 3 in the paragraph under Figure 2 add "the need for" after "internal and external results suggests" (before "more study" Is there narrative for Figure 3 Report Card 2023 Attendance" |
√ eo240401 All changes have been made. |
| 240327 | 240327 Ch4 | I only noticed 2 "corrections" on page 1 under "Responses to the critical areas of focus" #2., second bullet "The remain" should be the remaining. #6 The Maris Stella administration should... "Principal" is the only word. Should there be a complete sentence? |
√ eo 240328 |